Sunday, December 03, 2006

The following stanza was first thing that popped into head when saw this week's word, "might":
"For of all sad words of tongue or pen,
The saddest are these: "It might have been!"

Might be kinda melodramatic- but...




















John Greenleaf Whittier
"Maud Muller"
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Maud Muller, on a summer's day,
Raked the meadow sweet with hay.

Beneath her torn hat glowed the wealth
Of simple beauty and rustic health.

Singing, she wrought, and her merry glee
The mock-bird echoed from his tree.

But, when she glanced to the far-off town,
White from its hill-slope looking down,

The sweet song died, and a vague unrest
And a nameless longing filled her breast, --

A wish, that she hardly dared to own,
For something better than she had known.

The Judge rode slowly down the lane,
Smoothing his horse's chestnut mane.

He drew his bridle in the shade
Of the apple-trees, to greet the maid,

And ask a draught from the spring that flowed
Through the meadow, across the road.

She stooped where the cool spring bubbled up,
And filled for him her small tin cup,

And blushed as she gave it, looking down
On her feet so bare, and her tattered gown.

"Thanks!" said the Judge, "a sweeter draught
From a fairer hand was never quaffed."

He spoke of the grass and flowers and trees,
Of the singing birds and the humming bees;

Then talked of the haying, and wondered whether
The cloud in the west would bring foul weather.

And Maud forgot her brier-torn gown,
And her graceful ankles, bare and brown,

And listened, while a pleased surprise
Looked from her long-lashed hazel eyes.

At last, like one who for delay
Seeks a vain excuse, he rode away.

Maud Muller looked and sighed: "Ah me!
That I the Judge's bride might be!"

"He would dress me up in silks so fine,
And praise and toast me at his wine.

"My father should wear a braodcloth coat,
My brother should sail a painted boat.

"I'd dress my mother so grand and gay,
And the baby should have a new toy each day.

"And I'd feed the hungry and clothe the poor,
And all should bless me who left our door."

The Judge looked back as he climbed the hill,
And saw Maud Muller standing still:

"A form more fair, a face more sweet,
Ne'er hath it been my lot to meet.

"And her modest answer and graceful air
Show her wise and good as she is fair.

"Would she were mine, and I to-day,
Like her, a harvester of hay.

"No doubtful balance of rights and wrongs,
Nor weary lawyers with endless tongues,

"But low of cattle, and song of birds,
And health, and quiet, and loving words."

But he thought of his sister, proud and cold,
And his mother, vain of her rank and gold.

So, closing his heart, the Judge rode on,
And Maud was left in the field alone.

But the lawyers smiled that afternoon,
When he hummed in court an old love tune;

And the young girl mused beside the well,
Till the rain on the unraked clover fell.

He wedded a wife of richest dower,
Who lived for fashion, as he for power.

Yet oft, in his marble hearth's bright glow,
He watched a picture come and go;

And sweet Maud Muller's hazel eyes
Looked out in their innocent surprise.

Oft, when the wine in his glass was red,
He longed for the wayside well instead,

And closed his eyes on his garnished rooms,
To dream of meadows and clover blooms;

And the proud man sighed with a secret pain,
"Ah, that I were free again!

"Free as when I rode that day
Where the barefoot maiden raked the hay."

She wedded a man unlearned and poor,
And many children played round her door.

But care and sorrow, and child-birth pain,
Left their traces on heart and brain.

And oft, when the summer shone hot
On the new-mown hay in the meadow lot,

And she heard the little spring brook fall
Over the roadside, through the wall,

In the shade of the apple-tree again
She saw a rider draw his rein,

And, gazing down with a timid grace,
She felt his pleased eyes read her face.

Sometimes her narrow kitchen walls
Stretched away into stately halls;

The weary wheel to a spinnet turned,
The tallow candle an astral burned;

And for him who sat by the chimney lug,
Dozing and grumbling o'er pipe and mug,

A manly form at her side she saw,
And joy was duty and love was law.

Then she took up her burden of life again,
Saying only, "It might have been."

Alas for maiden, alas for judge,
For rich repiner and household drudge!

God pity them both ! and pity us all,
Who vainly the dreams of youth recall;

For of all sad words of tongue or pen,
The saddest are these: "It might have been!"

Ah, well ! for us all some sweet hope lies
Deeply buried from human eyes;

And, in the hereafter, angels may
Roll the stone from its grave away!

9 Comments:

Blogger Brine Blank said...

Nice setup here! Very thoughtful...

3:19 PM  
Blogger HARDWAX said...

Ah, such an image, the beautiful, the lost chance-might have been, in a spotlight of his or her memory. and the creature with the pain of what might have been, quietly desperate, universal tragedy for most people I think.
The poem is a bit devastating, your piece makes it even more so,

I don't know, this piece is just awesome Abbydoodles!

3:39 PM  
Blogger HARDWAX said...

I'm pretty sure I meant Andydoodles.

3:40 PM  
Blogger luisa brehm said...

this is sooooo greeeeeeeeeat, Andy !!! i just love it ....
might have been ??? let me think .... it will be !!!
Magic nite
lots of hugggggssssss ;-))))))

6:25 PM  
Blogger luisa brehm said...

i mean, happy words !!!

6:28 PM  
Anonymous Anonymous said...

Powerful!!

9:42 PM  
Blogger AndyDoodler said...

Thanks Brine!

Thanks HW! Abby? You can call me Abbydoodles, Abby Road, Dear Abby, or Abbynormal...

Thanks Luisa! Yeah- might be.
Happy words to you too!

Thanks Studio Lolo!

5:33 PM  
Blogger Lori Witzel said...

What a wonderful image!

I have to share that, until I read the poem, I thought for a moment the old gent was sitting in front of the glow from a television.

It certainly made for a different story in my mind than what the poem unfolded...but one with a similar point of view.

Thanks for sharing this.

6:17 PM  
Blogger luisa brehm said...

happyyyyyyy sunday, Andy !!!
lots of hugsssssssss ;-))))))))

6:02 AM  

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